Sticky Rice Next to Paddy Fields

This is basically a sketch drawn as a token of my gratitude for three gentlemen who always 'like' my recent artworks, even my train photos and video as well. They are MCMXC2, brother Azrai Dollah (non-member of dA) and brother Miftachul Huda (non-member of dA). With addition of suggestion from a close friend and still related to my last sketch, I decided to make it pretty much like welcoming snacks beside paddy fields in Kampung of English Pare, Kediri, East Java.

Here we have three young cute maidens welcoming our three gentlemen. Let's call them Dira, Melia and Mimi; Dira is the eldest (the left-most girl) while Mimi is the youngest (the right-most girl). They are not siblings, btw, it's just they are somehow 'acquainted' with our three gentlemen. Seems like Melia is brother Azrai's student while Mimi thinks of brother Miftach as her big brother.

To make it looks more manga-ish, I wrote what they say in Japanese, of course they are English texts as well. As for the background, it's taken from my photo collection. It's actually low quality since it's taken with my cell phone camera.

...and it seems like I can't draw foods in detail yet.

Comments and constructive critics are encouraged.